While the
snow continued to fall, he kept a wary eye on the raiders, collecting as much
information from his observations as possible. Each ship carried around eighty
men, yielding an approximate total well over a thousand men. With the exception
of two scouting patrols of eight men each, the rest remained on the beach. From
that, he deduced they were most probably unaware of a human presence on the
island.
One
patrol turned toward the far end of the island, well away from the caves where
the women were hiding. The other group headed directly across the plateau in a
line that would bring them close to the beach where the ship wrecked earlier
that morning. That group passed very near to where he lay hidden. He held his
breath as they trod past. With his recent knowledge of the trees and standing
stones in the immediate area, he was able to calculate an approximate
comparison and arrive at a height estimate. Ten feet. They were true giants
with corresponding strengths and abilities.
Shadow
wondered how they coped with the nasty weather, dressed only in their skimpy
fur cloaks, rough knee length tunics and thigh high boots. Wild unkempt dark
hair streamed down their backs and when one man laughed heartily at something
another had said, Shadow caught a glimpse of a startling double array of
pointed teeth.
After
the two patrols returned and gave every appearance of settling in, he used his
scope to satisfy his remaining questions about the raiders. The gray light of
day was waning rapidly, but in the flaring glow of the fires he focused on one
man’s face, absently watching the raider vigorously gnawing on an animal’s leg
bone. At least he hoped it was an animal. Shadow’s stomach cramped as he
recalled Ani’s report of them being cannibals. He should have been put off by
the two rows of crooked teeth the man displayed as he tore another hunk of meat
from the bone, but hunger could gloss over many unpleasantries.
Besides, the raiders’
eating habits weren’t Shadow’s primary interest. All afternoon he’d puzzled
over the odd headgear the raiders wore. Now through the narrow lens, he realized
their helmets were actually some sort of feathery, furry hats shaped like
lizards. Most were green, but there was a smattering of other colors that
apparently denoted rank.
Then, as he focused on the strange helmet on the
man’s head, its golden eyes blinked.
© Dragon's Cauldron by Anny Cook 2013
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DeleteThis is what I like about you as a writer - you don't write fast, repetitive short stories for a buck.
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